General Intro
# has worked hard this year and made excellent progress.
# has worked reasonably hard this year and made steady progress.
# has not really made much effort this year and has not made any significant progress.
Because of frequent absences, # has missed a lot of work and has made slow progress.
Because of frequent absences, coupled with a lack of effort when ^ does attend, # has made very little, if any, progress this year.
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class
In class,
^ demonstrates an excellent understanding of
^ demonstrates a fair understanding of
^ finds it difficult to grasp the concepts of
what is meant by "Health and Well-being" and the factors that affect an individual's state of health and well-being. 
^ can relate theory to real life.
^ is beginning to grasp how theory relates to real life.
^ is finding it difficult to relate theory to real life.

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Coursework
^ has been able to demonstrate this good understanding in the first draft of * coursework.
^ has been able to show some understanding of this in the first draft of * coursework.
Unfortunately, ^ has not been able to demonstrate this understanding in the first draft of * coursework.
Consequently, ^ has found it very difficult to demonstrate any understanding of this in the first draft of * coursework.
Unfortunately, failure to submit the completed first draft of ~ coursework has made it difficult to assess ~ understanding
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Comment c/w
#'s coursework is good.  ^ has produced an excellent case study.
#'s coursework shows promise and ~ case study is progressing nicely.
# has not yet submitted enough work to assess the progress of ~ coursework.
# has made very little effort to produce any coursework at all.
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Attitude
^ works independently.
^ relies too much on help from ~ teacher.
^ works well as a member of a group.
^ makes a good oral contribution to class work and is willing to share ~ opinions.
^ is willing to listen to the opinions of others.
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perf/target
I am pleased to say that # is working above the level of ~ target grade.
# is working at the level of * target grade.
Unfortunately,^ is working below the level indicated by * target grade.
^ is currently working towards * target grade.

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Behaviour
# is a polite, friendly, hardworking member of the group.  It has been a pleasure to teach * this year.
# occasionally allows *self to be distracted.  ^ must concentrate fully at all times.
# can be a distracting member of the class.  ^ must ensure that ^ does not distract others from their work.
Although a little chatty at times, # usually produces all the work that is required.  Full concentration would help * to improve ~ standard of work.
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Targets
# must listen to and follow verbal advice that ^ is given.
^ must follow written feedback that has been given about ~ first draft.
^ should try to contribute more to class  and group discussion.
^ must submit work punctually and completed to the best of ~ ability.
^ must stay on task.
^ should try to attend lessons regularly.
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Comment 10

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