Introduction
# is an extremely able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in ICT and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. 

# is an able and enthusiastic member of the group who takes a keen interest in  ICT and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work. 

# is an able and conscientious member of the group who displays a real interest in the subject and appears to enjoy all aspects of the work.  

# is a reserved member of the group who displays a quiet interest in the subject and participates in practical work with enthusiasm. 

# is a friendly member of the group who displays considerable interest in the subject and participates in practical work with enthusiasm.

# is a friendly student who works with enthusiasm and regularly contributes to class discussion.

# appears to enjoy this subject but finds it difficult to concentrate at all times.

# appears to enjoy this subject but ~ frequent absences are having a serious effect on the standard of ~ work.

# appears to enjoy this subject but ~ inability to concentrate and stay focused on the task in hand is having a serious effect on the standard of ~ work.

# shows little evidence of interest in this subject and ~ inability to concentrate is having a serious effect not only on the standard of ~ work but also on the work of others in the group.
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Coursework
^ works hard on the coursework and consequently is making excellent progress.

^ works hard on the coursework and is making good progress.


Although ^ finds the coursework difficult, ^ tries hard and is making progress.

^ finds the coursework difficult and will need to work hard to maintain an acceptable standard.

~ coursework is progressing slowly and ^ will need to concentrate and make every effort to complete in time.

~ coursework is progressing but ^ needs to concentrate fully during lessons if it is to be completed on time.

^ will need to continue to work hard with ~ coursework if ^ is to complete it on time.

Although ^ finds coursework difficult, ^ is working hard to improve the standard of his work.

If ^ is to obtain a good grade in this subject ^ will need to submit a good piece of coursework this term.

Although ~ coursework is progressing, there is still room for improvement if ~ work is to reflect his ability.

Although ~ coursework is progressing, there is still room for improvement if ~ work is to be of a good standard.
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Exam
# has an excellent grasp of the concepts involved in the course and  this was reflected in ~ high examination mark.
#'s grasp of the concepts involved in the course is very good and ^ consequently performed well in the recent examination.
# works hard on the theory aspects of the course and deserves the good examination mark ^ obtained in the recent examination.
# does not find the written work easy and ^ will need to work hard if ^ is to obtain a good grade in the  examination.
#'s recent examination showed little evidence of revision and consequently ~ mark was disappointing.
#'s examination mark was a little disappointing and ^ will need to revise more thoroughly for the examination in the summer.
#'s examination mark was disappointing and ^ will need to revise thoroughly for the examination in the summer and ^ must remember to check all answers carefully.
#'s examination mark was disappointing and ^ will need to revise more thoroughly for the examination in the summer and ^ should try to include more detail in ~ answers.
#'s examination mark was disappointing and ^ will need to revise thoroughly for the examination in the summer and ^ should remember to read all questions carefully before attempting to answer.
There was little evidence of revision in #'s recent examination.  ^ will need to work hard in the summer if ^ is to improve ~ grade.
To improve ~ examination grade, # should remember to read the questions carefully and give more detail in ~ answers.
To improve ~ examination grade, # should remember to read the questions carefully and check ~ answers thoroughly.
# will need to revise more thoroughly for the examination in the summer.
# does not find the written work easy and will need to revise thoroughly for the summer examination.
Although # worked hard for the recent examination ^ made some errors and ~ mark was consequently disappointing.  With more practice, I am sure ^ can improve on this grade.
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Target
^ should aim to improve the organisation of ~ work in order to improve ~ output.
^ should aim to maintain the high quality of ~ work during the rest of the year.
I hope ^ can sustain ~ current interest in and enthusiasm towards ICT.
I hope ^ can maintain ~ determination to understand all aspects of the work.
^ should aim to produce ~ best work at all times in order to improve the overall standard of ~ work.
^ needs to get back to the really high standard of the first year of the course.
^ should aim to put more consistent effort into  all aspects of ~ work.
^ should make an effort to concentrate more during lessons.
^ should make more effort to avoid being distracted during lessons.
With continued effort, #  should be able to obtain a good grade in this subject.
^ should aim to maintain the high quality of ~ coursework during the rest of the year.
# will need to revise well for the examination.
# will need to revise thoroughly for the examination.


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Final




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